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All Deviations

The Long Road-Chapter 17- by ~Farain12:iconFarain12:



    Jimmy dropped his phone and ran to the hospital entrence. He ran inand went straight back to Roses room. The same bithchy nurse was trying to stop him. Sir! I thought we've been through this! You cant go back there without an appointment! The nurse yelled, while pulling on Jimmys arm. Jimmy turned around, looked into her eyes with insane anger, and said, Shuve the fucking appointment up your fatass! I dont have fucking time for you! She just walked away. Jimmy continued running for Roses room, when he got there nurses and the docter were all around her.

  Get the paddles, now! turn the dial to four. The doctor was saying. Jimmys stomoch turned when the doctor said "paddles". All he could do was stand there and stair at the backs of many nurses. "CLEAR" the doctor said loudly. They all backed up a good three feet from the table. Jimmy could see Rose now, her face was purple, there was five times as more vomit as there was before he left. "Clear" the doctor said again loudly, He put the paddles on Roses cheast. As he shocked her she jumped. turn it to five! the doctor yelled. She jumped once again as the doctor shocked her unbeating heart. One more time. the doctor said.
C'mon Rose, please make it. Jimmy whispered. As the docter shocked her the last time, the nurse looked at Roses heart moniter, Shes got a pulse! the nurse said.
her heart rate is still very high. Rose opened her eyes and looked at Jimmy standing in the doorway. Her heart rate is going back down to normal, shes stable now. One of the nurses said.

The doctor looked at Jimmy, he got up from his chair and walked over to him. What happened? Jimmy asked. Well, as soon as you left, she kept getting worse and worse, she vomited about every five to ten seconds. After a while, her body started to shut down. we got her back. the strangest thing was that right when you were standng in the doorway, she stabelized. Jimmy smiled. Can I see her? Jimmy asked. Yes, go right ahead. The doctor said.

  
   Jimmy quickly rushed to my side after talking to the doctor, I smiled at him. As a big tear rolled down his cheek, I quickly wiped it away. He smiled at me. He looked back at the doctor. You need to leave for a few minutes. Without hesitation, he did. Jimmy took the oversized t-shirt off the counter. I need to change your clothes.
Jimmy took off his jacket so he wouldnt get vomit on it. I tried fighting back, but I was too weak that i just let him. Jimmy was probably the only person I trusted anymore. He was having trouble takeing off the corset, because it was covered with vomit, He soon figured it out, then he took off my pants, because they were also covered with vomit. He got a paper towel and started to wipe off my skin that the vomit has soaked through. Jimmy went over to the sink and washed the vomit off his hands. He took the large t-shirt, it was black, with an Avenged Sevenfold logo on the front. He put it over my head and pulled my arms through one at a time.

   I saw a large bottle of water sitting on the counter. I streatched out my arm pointing at it. Jimmy quickly went and got it for me. As he put the end of it to my chaped, bleeding lips, I started to drink, I drank the whole bottle. Jimmy sat the empty bottle back on the counter and sat in a very comfortable looking chair. I streatched out my arms at him, he knew instently what I wanted. He got up and got a blanket and wrapped it around me, he picked me up and sat back down in the chair with me in his lap. He sarted rocking the chair slowly back and fourth. I put my head on his bear cheast and listened to his heartbeat before drifting off to sleep.
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I KNOW WHAT IT SOUNDS LIKE AT THE END!!! but dont have a perverted mind please:D i made this one a little long because my bros waiting for the computed and i wanted to annoy him *gigglefit*

show me love and tell me what you think!

Rose, Salem, frankie, Jackson (C) MINE!!! if you steal me characters, i shall have Jimmy go all kung-Fu on you ass...Synyster will help too.

M.Shadows, Synyster Gates, Zacky Vengeance, Johnny Christ & The Rev (C) themselves

i cant wait to put up the next chapter! it will hopefully be up tomorrow.

This is what is called a FAN-FICTION, nothing in this story is based on true facts... except that the Avenged Sevenfold boys are awsome but thats about it.

~Farain12
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~Twlight389:iconTwlight389: May 10, 2008, 11:16:43 AM
I loove It! and it does sound a little weird at the end.
~zany13:iconzany13: May 10, 2008, 2:19:33 PM
love it!
you make jimmy sound sooo sweet:) can't wait 'til next chapter

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Pink is the new black, pink is the new black, pink is the new black! Won't we all know that the fucking black is the new black! Stupid french. ~ Synyster Gates
~katara909:iconkatara909: May 10, 2008, 3:22:39 PM
aww... love it. can't wait for more

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M.S.H.A.D.O.W.S
Marvelous Sexy Hunk Adeptly Delivering Orgasms and
Warm Stimulation

Vampires can love you forever.

A good friend will come bail you out of jail, but a true friend will be sitting rght next to you saying damn that was fun
~Farain12:iconFarain12: May 11, 2008, 1:17:33 PM
well, someone had to do it, and i thought because she trusts Jimmy so much, he would be the best one to do it. :D

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:skull: :skullbones: one day dude, im gonna run into the woods and never come back, and when i come back, im gonna be the knife master! :skullbones: :skull:

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Im going to kill you! (some random person) why? Because i have mental problems. - The Rev
~Farain12:iconFarain12: May 11, 2008, 1:20:17 PM
Thankyou SOOO much!!!
I know! YaY JiMmY!!!!
The next chapter will be up ASAP :D

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:skull: :skullbones: one day dude, im gonna run into the woods and never come back, and when i come back, im gonna be the knife master! :skullbones: :skull:

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Im going to kill you! (some random person) why? Because i have mental problems. - The Rev
~Farain12:iconFarain12: May 11, 2008, 1:21:32 PM
Tanks:D
Me Wuves Jimmy!
it isent too obvious... is it? :D :D :D :hug: :D :D :D

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:skull: :skullbones: one day dude, im gonna run into the woods and never come back, and when i come back, im gonna be the knife master! :skullbones: :skull:

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Im going to kill you! (some random person) why? Because i have mental problems. - The Rev
~di3zel:icondi3zel: May 11, 2008, 2:16:47 PM
it smells like love.......:P

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~ I've Had Enough It's Time For Something Real, Don't Respect The Words You Speak You've Gone Too Far... aaaa... CLONE ~!!
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~Farain12:iconFarain12: May 11, 2008, 3:44:49 PM
ok, ive changed my mind to never doing it, to thinking about it. :D
remember "thinking" about it:)

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:skull: :skullbones: one day dude, im gonna run into the woods and never come back, and when i come back, im gonna be the knife master! :skullbones: :skull:

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Im going to kill you! (some random person) why? Because i have mental problems. - The Rev